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Walls Torn Down

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I lay my hands down, I am finished

My creation is complete but is it perfect?

We could say we are complete but are we truly perfect?

I could write and write all day about how I could end my own life

Should I go through with it?

I could stand in the rain getting wet but should I leave?

What must have been going through thy head

I saw a ripple not a wave, I must have been dreaming

It all began so quick and ended so quick

Ocean waves will die on the shore line but the water remains

I could breathe the cold air, should I get warm?

We could do so many things but should we?

I meet many walls blocking my path, I cannot get past

I get into many things I cannot win nor can I overcome

The rain drop makes a ripple but the body makes a wave

The soul makes no noise when leaving the body

What were we all thinking?

We thought that it would be the only way out

We thought we would be in paradise once we were out of this horrid life

I was stuck in a path that ended in a wall, preventing me from seeing whats to come

It was amazing how the end was just the beginning, how wrong was I

We seem to think the one with the bigger gun is more of a man

But the man that stands with his hands behind his head, taking the bullet

That's the real man

I was stuck in a path with a wall, debating whether I should be a man and stay

Or run straight into the wall and remain hurt and in dying agony

One thing we all must see in our lives before it's to late

Is that whether the wall is made of stone or steel

All walls can be torn down

With just the right amount of life and willing to live

You can tear the wall down
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Suicide is not the answer, I realize that now.
You too can tear down your wall
Just believe that things will get better
Then you will survive
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